Tugrul
New Member
King of the Turks
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Tugrul
Apr 18, 2008 23:49:48 GMT
Post by Tugrul on Apr 18, 2008 23:49:48 GMT
Name: Tugrul Age: 36 Height: 6'8' Build: Strong and Muscular Hair:BrownEyes: Black General Appearance: Nationality: Turk Occupation: KingFamily: His father was a noble man but his mother died when Tugrul was 6 Religion: Islam Allegiance: Turk Weapons: A battle sword Other Posessions: His mother necklace Strengths and Weaknesses: Strong at fight , Weak at death or wound. Personality: Brave and Fearless he is alway prepare for battle though he is has a short temper and is sometimes naive. History: Tugrul was born in the Turkish Lands, his parents were wealthy but his mother died of a fever when he was 6. Later in the years he was a soldier and was experiance that he became a lord in the same year Tugrul has succeeded and became king of the Turks
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Tugrul
Apr 19, 2008 7:15:38 GMT
Post by Edward I on Apr 19, 2008 7:15:38 GMT
Your history needs to be at least two paragraphs, and your personality at least one (so more than the single sentence you have at the moment), so can you correct these, please?
Oh, and can you make your weaknesses something other than those as things like death, wounds and illness are weaknesses that every human has, not just your character. Of course, if by wounds you mean he has a low pain tolerance, that's fine!
Thanks.
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